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My Bully

My bully will always be part of my life.
My bully I have been abused by all my life.
My bully is my Sister!

My bully will aways be part of my life,
why does she have to be part of my life?
I will hat her for ever and ever!

My bully I have been abused by all my life.
My bully has done every thing to me!
or at least that is how I feel!
why was I her target?

My sister is my bully!
My sister I will always have to deal with.
My sister will always be a part of my life!
My sister has abused me all my life!

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  • Annexed Josephine
    August 11, 2008
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    Pure shit. Good job. I like the way you rhymed life with life in the start. Really nice.


  • Solidified
    August 11, 2008

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    Oh sisters are notorious for abusing each other. I'm the oldest but somehow both of my younger sisters have bullied me. It's okay, I've learned to stand up to them. So no worries for me. Good job expressing the frustrations of having to know your bully for your whole life.