zephyr breeze--
leaves rustle, silent fall
to her… autumn song~
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malabuku...
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A contest entry
- Haiku and Bless You! by azure85.
4500 points, ended August 22, 2008, 57 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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zephyr breeze--
leaves rustle, silent fall
to her… autumn song~
Very pretty haiku, all the gentle ending of the season wrapped up in three lines. Thank you so much.
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I love the verses it sounded like an autumn song. I do not do well at Haiku they escape me all together. I love fall you captured well in a few short words. Thank you for your comments on my work they are appreciated.
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Oh, I drop by your poetry once again ^^
Very nice haiku, I suck at writing them...
but you don't seem to have any trouble
"leaves rustle, silent fall
to her… autumn song~"
I like that
Good luck!
Claire x
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Mal you are such a romantic...and rightfully so
this drips of the passion that is you
peace Muddy
love the malabuku
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muddy...ya think lol...oh started to read your jimi poem..but was much to tired...to continue...i will wait till i am in bluezy mood, then go back to it...
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