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Chance

The other day,
as I was walking down the street
an old friend,
not seen for ages
I chanced to bump into.

When he'd picked himself up
I brushed him off,
and then rushed off myself.

A contest entry

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  • etoile
    August 12, 2008
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    LOL
    wtf are you takling about hahaa
    good luck in the contest!!


  • LittleAnn
    August 12, 2008
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    Uhh... Umm... Well...

    Great job, I have no idea what you're talking (writing) about.

    Annie


    • Shenton silver member
      August 12, 2008
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      Annie

      Thankyou for reading and commenting; and for your very generous applause.

      The contest called for 'very bad poetry', so apparently I've succeeded, if you haven't any idea what I'm talking about.

      With best wishes from 'down-under'.

      Shenton


  • Annexed Josephine
    August 11, 2008

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    It allows the reader to finish it off themselves. Did she just go home and masturbate about thinking about the person she happened to bump into? Did she go and think about killing the person she collided with?

    Great job!!