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Let Me Read Your Mind....

I am a very good
at reading everyone's mind
and let me prove this to you
by giving it a try.

Ahhh...now I can see that
you're leaving AllPoetry
you think it's boring and dorky.
Now this, I can't believe!

When I first joined,
I was not much of a poet, you see.
I was just an 11-year-old girl
but there was a poet inside me.

She was just waiting to escape,
to burst out and write.
She entered contests and got involved
and developed her poetic mind.

I can't understand
why you'd want to leave.
AllPoetry is another world...
a world that helped me.

If it weren't for AP,
I wouldn't know what I do now.
I wouldn't know that one day
I'll look back and say "wow".

Author notes

Contest entry, to persuade an AP member to stay!

I was 11 when I joined, I'm 13 now. I've never once got bored of AllPoetry, and I get bored easily!

A contest entry

So, will you stay?!

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Comments


  • SmartBrick
    August 12, 2008

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    This was AH-mazing!I think this was a beautiful write!She should stay after reading this!!!!Good luck!


  • Miss Chievous
    August 12, 2008
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    Great!!!!I hope she does stay!!!!!!
    Good Luck!