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When You Look At Me

When you look at me
what do you see
Am I pretty and nice
or am I ugly and mean
When you look at me
what do you see
Do I help
or do I hurt
When you look at me
what do you see
Do you like me
or do you dislike me
When you look at me
what do you see

Author notes

When people look at i always wondered they think about me.

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When you look at me what do YOU see

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Comments


  • babaygirl88c
    August 3

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    i will deff give credit on this one i mean its first poem. as u keep writing ur knowlege will grow with it have funn writing love ya


  • e m i l y
    August 23, 2008

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    Okay again, people haven't been following the rules.
    I have no clue what form you're using. It obviously
    repeats but it doesn't just says the same exact thing every [what I'd like to consider a] stanza.

    Sorry.


  • queen Moderators member
    August 13, 2008
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    welcome to all poetry

    Hi icecat8

    As you get older you will come to learn, it doesn't matter what other people think. The only person that matters is you. Make yourself happy and others will flock to you This is a very good poem please keep writing, reading and commenting
    Barbara
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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    August 12, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    It can be hard to deal with looks from people in society, and it must be really hard as you are only 10 years old.
    You appear wise beyond your years; great poem.

    ♥
    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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