Confused and lost.
Why do i feel like i need love?
Why do i feel like life is slipping threw my fingers.
Why do i feel like telling you,
My best friend,
To shut up?
Do i just love him,
Because he shows just a little affection??
Confused and lost,
With only questions and no answers.
Ill climb onto my bed,
And ill hide my face and my tears,
Ill curl up in a ball,
And try, for just a moments piece,
And forget that im alive.
A contest entry
- vent it out 2! by Lsh-x.
300 points, ended August 29, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
im pretty sure this is NOTHING of what u want....but i guess its what came to mind.
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You made me cry really! Its too emotional and I felt really sad.And this is really a good question
"Do i just love him,
Because he shows just a little affection??"
You wrote it exactly as it is and it is always like this. Well this poem is really, really brilliant. Sad but awesome. I loved it but with tears in the eyes. Just keep on writing like this! Best of Luck!
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oh wow! im shocked! thank u so much! didnt mean to make u cry! but im glad u did
not in a mean way. thank u thank u thank u so much!
*hugs* tay.
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Very well done RD, you've earned my applause.
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wow.
you've put such deep emotions into such a short passage, and that's a talent.
You've grasped every angle. This, you should be proud of!
Good luck and well done.
Thanks for entering
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Very nicely done.
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wow im always confused and lost and i can totley relate to this poem cuz you know who..... well me and him got in to a fight and right now where not speking it sucks
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aww that sucks! what happened??
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I think we're all confused and lost from time to time. Good poem, Tay. And good luck in the contest!
--Genesis.
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