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prey of seasonal cliche

Summer came
when spring didn't find
any solid reason for sticking around.
And as summer lingered,
her beads of sweat
blurred every line of logic.

We'll try to imitate the heat of the day,
but time zones
keep our nights from touching.

Summer's over
and so are we.
(even you can't stop the seasons from changing.)

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summer love, criticisms very welcome

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  • aanika
    August 11, 2008

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    Summer came
    when spring didn't find
    any solid reason for sticking around.

    love that.
    also love the last stanza