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I linger in the pathway
lost memories screaming calling my name
let me say words whispered softly
so the words will flow ever so gently

In my mind of broken memories
filled with scars and open wounds
I lie and sleep for hours
hoping the pain will pass me by

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I have completly lost myself but i dont mind

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  • EvenStarsBreak--x
    August 14, 2008

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    A very powerful and deep write. =] Very nice flow as well, excellent job. Thank you for the entry.

    x-Pretty-Odd-x <3