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Because of You

Because of you
My dreams are nightmares
And I don't know where to turn

Because of  you
My life is empty
and for you, I still yearn

Because of you
Nothing makes sense now
I have no friends left now
Because of you
Not loving me

Because of you
My laughter ceases
And my smile it fades away

Because of you
My hearts not beating
And I don't know what to say

Because of you
Nothing even matters anymore
I don't care anymore
Because of you
Not loving me

And I can't keep up with my feelings
And I just stare at my ceiling
Wishing you would turn around and remember
Remember times we shared together
Remember dancing in all weathers
Just us two
Because of you
Not loving me

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    August 20, 2008

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    I can definately relate to this one personally, as I have been through similar...my ex still haunts me and I hate him for that.


  • Dygurl
    August 12, 2008

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    Very sad, emotional, honest. So many people can relate.
    The Because of you line is alittle too repeditive for the flow.
    Good luck in your contest

  • sexycowboy
    August 11, 2008

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    Im so sorry to hear that

    i know how that feels i feel like that every day its the wrost feeling in the world its a great write keep up the good work


  • Gina.Marie
    August 11, 2008
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    This is so sad but it's a good poem! LYLAS!!!

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