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Enchanted

When I was a child
I thought that beyond the highway barriers
past the half-sized walls
outlining subdivisions
was another land
a secret garden
or perhaps a moat
a dragon, and a castle.
The ivy trailing over the concrete-- or was it stone?
Hinted at greatness past
A Narnia or enchanted wood.
Now I know that
those are the unwanted properties
the ones the realtor
works overtime to sell.
Close to the road
the smells of tar and gasoline
intrude on people's fairytales.
Traffic jams and a chorus of horns
don't make for happily-ever-afters.
Past childhood, I know
that such things don't exist.
Lewis wrote an allegory.
In Aslan's kingdom, lipstick
was a sin and worth
had color.
In his happily-ever-after, the
Penvensie kids were dead.
Real life is Wicked,
the twisted, backwards version
where the slipper doesn't fit, where
poor Ella hits her head
on the ceiling made of glass,
where Little Red
is devoured and bone-thin Beauty
stays asleep.  Here,
adults count dragon-half lives and
use smoke and mirrors for their spells.

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  • firefly53633
    August 12, 2008

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    Nicely written!

    I loved the contrast from childhood viewpoint to adult viewpoint. Too bad we as adults couldn't retain some of those magical, fantasies! Nicely penned, easy to read.Thanks for the read and keep writing. You have a storyteller's voice it seems. Great quality! Return the favor please and review one of mine?