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ThE fRiEnD tEsT

iF yOu WaNt To Be My FrIeNd,
YoU'LL hAvE tO pAsS mY tEsT.
iT iSn'T vErY eAsY,
cAuSe It'S oNlY fOr ThE bEsT

fIrSt, YoU rUn ArOuNd ThE pArK
wItHoUt AnY dElAy
If YoUr FrIeNdS cALL fOr YoU,
jUsT tEll ThEm YoU cAn'T pLaY

nExT, pIcK mE a DaIsY,
aNd PuT iT iN a VaSe.
GuArD iT wItH yOuR lIfe
AnD mAkE sUrE iT's NoT mIsPlAcEd

FiNd Me In ThE sAnDbOx
I'll GiVe YoU a ShInY rInG
iT mEaNs We'Re FrIeNdS fOrEvEr
FoR sUmMeR, fAll, WiNtEr AnD sPrInG.

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  • xeroabyss II
    August 24, 2008
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    Sounds more like a first graders "Boyfriend" test


  • Melodies
    August 16, 2008

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    ADORABLE!

    This poem is so darling, it makes me want to cry! It is absolutely precious and looks great... sounds so tenderly childish, and that is a compliment in this contest, for it is supposed to sound that way. I LOVE IT!

  • Going Forever
    August 12, 2008
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    Very funny name and poem...good write!

    Magikal fairy poet