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Blood Stained Skin

Blood stained skin
Razor runs deep
In to my skin
Cutting my pain away
Every time it stains
Leaving me with a sign
To show how to scare the pain away
Hiding my stains from the world
Cutting over and over
Never stopping
Satins never seem to go away

Not done yet....anything I should change?

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  • wick3dlov3ly
    March 4
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    Kool!

    its a very deep poem i'm a 24/7 cutter and i know what your talking about.


  • In The Twilight
    November 18, 2008

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    a very dark poem...that seems to crawl into the deepest crevace of your mind. this hit home to me in a way, a long time ago i spent days with one who cut to heal the pain.


  • Blissfullhatred silver member
    October 18, 2008

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    lemme say this

    okay i do love this.
    "Cutting over and over
    Never stopping
    Satins never seem to go away"
    been there. no matter how hard you try.. u cant let go.
    it's like that dream where you're running but you just can't get away.


  • Blissfullhatred silver member
    August 24, 2008
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    oo entreeging