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so, i haven't found God yet

the textures of fingertips

grace my skin with the pain

of unrealiable love

i am a streetlight angel

so worn out

so worn down

leaves fall on my unprotected hands

and break my smile

with a frosty glance

i am deep inside of a bubble

full of words so sharp

they cut my tounge as i

reach out for the textures

of fingertips

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  • Dear Streetlight Angel;
    Love doesn't rest in the playground nor does it hide behind false promises. Even a Bar Room Queen cannot find true love in fermented refreshments. I do however love your poem and the strength you've brought to the table in wisdom. Very well written!
    In God's Love
    Three Doves


  • A falling star
    August 12, 2008
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    This was fantastic. I like the description. The ending is great.
    <3