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Tiger


The eye of the tiger,
she takes my breath away,
mystically charming,
with every move and sway.

Claws like roses thorns,
a pelt of such fine sheen,
she’s simply the best thing,
that my eyes have ever seen.





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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 12, 2008

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    She does indeed have a tigeress look about her! Nice flow and rhyme, excellent take on the pic


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 12, 2008

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    you did an outstanding job with the prompt. the rhyme and the flow is flawless. you painted her beauty with your words.

    I love this poem

    good luck

    kat


  • confused923e
    August 11, 2008
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    That's was amazing. Flowed excellently and the rhyming was beautifully smooth.


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 11, 2008

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    This is great and your rhyme is right there
    the flow is like the silk gown in the morning breeze.

    Riftkin