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for a lifetime

Missing image
for a lifetime
it feels i've known you
in my mind, my soul, my heart
 
long before i met you
you inhabited my very being

you are my muse, my inspiration
beloved bride of my soul

now i behold you, love i adore
we are complete, we are one
for a lifetime
  

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 12, 2008

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    Aww.. words filled with emotion, deep love and heartfelt!! Lovely take on the prompt!


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    August 12, 2008
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    Well written. I like your style.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 12, 2008

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    words written, spoken. so filled with love each one of them.. this is a beautiful poem that you have written..
    touches a place I do believe in someones heart, a special place at that.

    excellent take on the prompt

    good luck

    kat


  • Soft-Rain gold member
    August 12, 2008
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    I love you...what else can i say to this.
    You are Amazing!
    This is sweetly cherished by me.


  • retribusive
    August 11, 2008
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    this is very good.. although it KILLS to read. haha just ended a relationship. nice work though.


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 11, 2008
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    lovely words of love spoken here
    best of luck to you dear poet.

    Riftkin

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