When I look at this picture,
I am surrounded by peace.
I can imagine looking out my back door,
and seeing this scene.
So I take a deep breath,
and a visual of a lifetime.
Because this picture,
will always remain in my mind.
It reminds me of a painting,
or a 500 piece puzzle.
It reminds me of a place,
where I would love to sit and cuddle.
I think I can smell the trees,
I think I can Feel the sun.
I think it is my heart,
that this picture has won.
A contest entry
- Do you like this picture? by Going Forever.
525 points, ended August 24, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Love It!
This is a beautiful poem Jennifer.

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wow...great job!
Very nice poem!
Good luck in the contest!


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This is very beautiful and makes
the reader want to see exactly
what you are looking at. If only
everyday could be that great!
Good luck and keep up the wonderful
work here!
Jeremy0826


