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My visual

When I look at this picture,
I am surrounded by peace.
I can imagine looking out my back door,
and seeing this scene.

So I take a deep breath,
and a visual of a lifetime.
Because this picture,
will always remain in my mind.

It reminds me of a painting,
or a 500 piece puzzle.
It reminds me of a place,
where I would love to sit and cuddle.

I think I can smell the trees,
I think I can Feel the sun.
I think it is my heart,
that this picture has won.

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  • sherry2
    August 14, 2008
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    Love It!

    This is a beautiful poem Jennifer.

  • Going Forever
    August 12, 2008
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    wow...great job!

    Very nice poem!

    Good luck in the contest!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 11, 2008

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    This is very beautiful and makes
    the reader want to see exactly
    what you are looking at. If only
    everyday could be that great!
    Good luck and keep up the wonderful
    work here!




    Jeremy0826