Listen, for the ethereal echoeswhispering through the winds,
knocking at your window.
The eerie chills contort,the safest place you know
to a ghostly abode.
Carried on the mist,
is a mangled message
from the unknown -
You are not welcome.
Author notes
Alright, so I can hear the sound of darkness,
like frosted fears in a midnight subway 
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- Random Title Inspiration by amaranthine lover.
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Comments
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Nicely creative..chilling and eerie words you have penned...
thank you for sharing!
mystic -
This is creepy and quite different!
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creative and interesting, my friend, i enjoyed reading this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest.
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