when the world ended
I started to cling
to the hope that you were still real.
I looked into this sphere.
I hoped to see your non-existent face.
love do you still exist?
Im still waiting for a reason to move
before i turn to stone...
Author notes
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http://media.photobucket.com/image/wicca%20fairy/lo2894/pics1381_jpg_520.jpg?o=1
i tried for you
i dont think it is very good but here you go...
A contest entry
- Are You Bored? Well Then This is the Contest for You.. by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended August 12, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn those greenies into Gold (or silver or bronze) pt 5 by whispernthedark.
660 points, ended September 20, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Really good, some people just keep looking into that crystal ball hoping the answers will be handed to them. Life doesn't work that way, and if you don't move you are stuck forever. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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et doesnt *sniffffffffffff* rhymeeeeeeeeeeeee
hahah
i still like this one tho
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ooooh i like it !
and i ♥♥♥ the title its beautifulll <33
yay for the HM!
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aww
im glad you like it
hahah
if you could have been there for the creative process
hah
my poor boyfriend!!!
hahahah
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WOO HOO!!! honerable mention!!! yay!!! congrats sweetheart!
hahaha
love the poem
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Ahh yes, does love exist, is there a reason to move. Great take on the prompt.
L2 "start" should be "started" to remain grammatically correct.
L5 "non-existant" should be "non-existent"
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huh
i thought i fixed that
ohh but i will now
thank you for pointng it out!!
=]
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I think I've read better by you, and the concept was a little vague other than that, wasn't too shabby
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i guess you have to see the pic that i got it from
but yeah not my best
i had a hard time writing for the pic....
http://media.photobucket.com/image/wicca%20fairy/lo2894/pics1381_jpg_520.jpg?o=1
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that is just something wonderful to write
for that option... I love this poem ... poet
Riftkin
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thank you!!!
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I love it.. "love do you still exist?" I find myself asking this question over and over again. I think that this poem doesn't suck btw.. all I ever ask anyone is to just try..
you did a great job on the prompt.
good luck
kat
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thanks
i tried to do you proud!
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