Cherish

I have waited so long to taste your little lips,

and now that we are alone I can't get enough of this.

They say that you and I are much too young but,

the love that we feel is one that we can't deny.

One day I hope that they will understand.

Someday when we are old enough,

I am going to take you away from this place.

So that we can start a new life together.

I cherish every moment that we share,

and I hope that you will wait for me, my love.

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By me, right now

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Ms. Black Eyeliner
September 4, 2008
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awwwwwwww soooo cutte
kiwigirljacks
August 12, 2008
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Aww a first love is such a cute and precious thing. Lovely take on the prompt!
Sweet Impatience
August 11, 2008

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first love.. you did an excellent job with this picture prompt. your words capture them in a wonderful way.

excellent job with both the prompt & your poem

good luck

kat
perfectsunset
August 11, 2008

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Aww this was so tenderly and innocently sweet. Beautiful words used to express love between youth.
So emotion-filled and full of depth that exceeds an ocean. Loved this is all its simple beauty.

Breathless.

Good luck in the contest
Riftkin
August 11, 2008

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Such soft and tender love you have painted here.
I love the sweetness of this poem.

Best of luck to you.

Riftkin