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Undead Wolf

Smell of a dead rat,
also of a cat.
It's eyes so bright,
especially at the night.
They fall in a pile of bones,
When this happens they groan.
Resting in peace,
at the least.
Forever to stay..
but has no right to pay.

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  • Shancy Fayre
    December 14, 2008

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    This is a very deep poem. It brings a chill up my spine. I like the rhythm and rhyme. You write as a much older person would. Great job. Great imagery. Shancy.