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A Little Love



The whispers in the wind of nature's beauty,

that you were too blind to see for it's perfection;

the kiss of a sincere soul, upon a trembling frame

begging you to see, that your world's not falling apart.

No casket needed, for the bleeding and broken,

this is a nightingales eulogy, perfect penalty

for believing in sorrow, but the sun will come up.

It's purr of the feline, that scampers around in the sun,

looking for a playmate who will focus on her for once.

The canine companion, who would save his human counterpart

from a burning building, no obligations, just a loving heart.

 

So many splendors, so many sunshines,

the ending is eternal, the feeling is not.

Love, live and learn, though times are tough,

with love, strength and determination,

anything you believe in is enough.

Author notes

choose to live not die.
do not give up, try.
dont pent up, just cry.

you aren't the only one who hurts inside.

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    August 15, 2008

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    strong words from beginning to end, i mean that really, you have done a great job on this poem, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • No longer in use
    August 12, 2008

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    All that the world needs is a little love. As do I. I can sure give it out...but is it taken in? I'm not quite sure on how it feels. I need more experience and thus someone to experience it with. I thank you for your words. I appreciate your heartfelt write.


  • wonderbandalice
    August 11, 2008
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    why are my comments dissapearing?


  • wonderbandalice
    August 11, 2008
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    Beautiful poem.


    But I'm wondering if there's a typo in the title, perhaps?


  • wonderbandalice
    August 11, 2008
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    Awesome poem!
    But I'm wondering if there's a typo in the title, perhaps?

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