Crayola crayons, 500 colours.
Unflawed daisy,
'likes me,
likes me not'
Ancient book opened, musty smell.
Adged man smiles,
eyes alight.
Piano breaks the silence.
Chlorine pool,
cool on a hot summer day.
Blossoms open, morning dew.
Eyes meet, kisses under umbrellas.
New haircut.
Baby's first giggle.
Dusty attic,
treasures in trunks.
Lottery ticket wins $50,
sponsor a child.
Scrawl a poem, subway seat.
Summer peeks through winter's clutches.
Butterfly breaks cocoon.
Life is beautiful.
A contest entry
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632 points, ended August 12, 2008, 11 entries
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Wow. This is so beautiful. It perfectly describle the amazing chaos that is life. Great imagery & flow.
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OMG WOW....i really loved this!!!Its amazing and i loved how the title works in so perfectly with the poem!
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Thank you. Many things that are overlooked when darkness blinds the eyes. But now with light of love I see with new eyes the warm affection of people. Thank you for this . I need to see it.
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some of the most wonderful and beautiful things have been expressed in this piece, I completely agree with you, these are things worthy of being missed. Wonderfully wrote, very passionate. I hope people take heed. Tehre are so many beautiful things, we just notice all the negatives.
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Thank you so much!
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