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sugar meets its match


sugar cubes lined
waiting for the plunge

though they do not know
what exactly is going to happen

like marriage
when sugar hits water
the dissolving will prevail
and the sugar a mere
suggestion
to sweeten up this life

the water the way it really is

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  • transcendental baby gold member
    August 11, 2008

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    Yeah, but the sugar is suppose to make the water sweeter; when it doesn't than you gotta find something more satisfying