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I Remember

Green grass,
dew strung clippings
with the fresh cut smell.
Sticking between my toes,
as I ran. Barefoot.

Or maybe taking pictures,
smiles and games
long since forgotten.
pretending this hollow shell
would hold.

Perhaps even the tears.
Moments we can't get back,
even if we wanted too.
But mostly you...
My biggest memory...

Of a mistake.

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  • Virginia Logsdon
    September 9, 2008

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    Beautifully written! This poem is so vivid in it's descriptions!

    I really love the way you ended this poem.I got wonderful visuals from reading it, as well!I wrote a poem called " I remember", as well, as one of my first poems. May all your memories be fond ones! God bless you and yours!


  • whiterabbit.
    August 26, 2008

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    I really love this. It's so beautifully written and the imagery is gorgeous. I can picture everything so vividly. I love the way that the emotions come out of this. Brilliant job and thanks for entering.
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  • z etoile
    August 11, 2008
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    wow this is great we cannot get back memories but they are alive in our mind great job!