As an angel looks across the land ,
and the life before her she so understands.
How the earth and the sky are truly one ,
through a two way mirror from heavens songs are sung .
The new born birds and the old bull frog upon the stump,
it brings tears to her eyes and in her throte a lump.
For what our eyes see the angels also see,
so look toward love and life and harmony.
Upon the pond before you know your not alone ,
for upon this lake the angels also roam.
A place of Gods creation and each day brand new,
and to keep it that way is all in what you do.
Walk softly across the grassland and leave the flowers there,
breath in the loveliness of the fresh air .
Know the trees brings life and the very air we breathe ,
see that they are cared for and cut down not a tree .
Now as through the mirror we also shall see through one day,
how in the life of the living we are so on display.
How God and the angels tend the garden about us here,
and brings the sunrise and sunsets year after year.
Author notes
Love the visions brought for me to see and in watching nature I share it from within you see
A contest entry
- Do you like this picture? by Going Forever.
525 points, ended August 24, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Love the sentiment you share here,Patty..a loving way it is presented. Good for a young childs perception of how to view nature and its protection...Lovely write!
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I don't think you read can i have it between 5-20 lines...but it doesn't matter, It is only 4 more lines!
Great poem!
Good luck in the contest! 
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A most unique view,
the two way mirror,
heaven and earth,
and there you are,
seeing and sharing!
Aesthete
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I love it!
Especially the first verse: Heavens and the earth are one; or at least relfection of one in the same. Well done! This is a very nice poem!
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What a wonderful picture you give us here! This is fantastic!! Love the way the entire thing ties into the picture so nicely!! Great job!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Very well done, you have painted an incredable picture with your words. The picture is a nice touch but really is unneaded as you words already painted that tranquil quiet place. The rhyme also is very will done and I enjoyed the poem emensely.
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Darling imagery that you penned here! Wonderful take on the prompt. I hope you win gold for this poem; its well deserving of it! Amazing job.
Warmest,
Mylee -
we are angelica, some more then most
a touch of God in all.
as the Angels watch over us, it is up to us to look over each other.
you do this well my friend
compassion and love shine through your words.
God bless...
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