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Beautiful (Cinquain)




Old man,
painful movements,
limps towards corner store.
Child takes his elbow, smile blossoms.
Hopeful.




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This is my first time trying out Cinquains.

A contest entry

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  • new born
    January 31

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    This is so beautiful and simple and fantastic. THe imagery was beautiful, the wording divine and the flow very nice. Just a great poem.