A whole life lived at once
in one simple touch
shy souls brushing close
but one touch is not enough
and so we make each other music
I've never heard so sweet a tune
notes come rushing all at once
in an early lovers' swoon
Venus and Apollo leave their subtle traces
voices flowing smoothly through our song
as hand in hand they dance close
against the other's neck they sing along
with a gentle melody's touch
I offer to wipe away your tears
any rhythym that you could sing
is music to these solemn ears.
Author notes
For someone special. :]
Venus- The Goddess of Love
Apollo- The God of Music and Poetry
A contest entry
- True Love is Indestructible..Fictional Love Can Crumble Like Sod by FlipperSwitch.
375 points, ended September 11, 2008, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love your mention of Venus and Apollo- smartly and wonderfully written.
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Thank you. :]
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that is the most touching thing that i have ever heard it is a pleasure to read.:]
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Thank you.
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