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Where is the Silver Lining?



          & they
        marched




        visages of sleep fell
        one by one

        into purpureal slumber




        a fleeting
          pause




        questing for silver fleece




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Prompt: Describe to me a dream vision, of course, in twenty words.

I just really loved this pic, so I tied the prompt to that. I have actually dreamed of sheep before...and it IS a common sleep fable. I hope this is alright.

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  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    August 17, 2008
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    this is wonderful, thankyou for the entry!!