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Love Intertwined

kinetic kisses
a feathery touch
warm candlelight
a harmonic hush
teasing to tantalize
moving to moan
love...
intertwined and sewn

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prompt - 20 words

A contest entry

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  • carole21
    August 18, 2008
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    nicely penned for the prompt . . congrats on the gold


  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 11, 2008

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    Very nice

    To bring out the very thoughts of love and how two becomes one with such delicatly written form this is great


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 11, 2008

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    Beautiful words you have penned
    for this contest! I love the
    imagery in this background. Good
    luck to you with this one!




    Jeremy0826