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Unknown (Cinquain)

Unknown
Always alone
Too timid to twinkle
Just a small dull star from afar
Unseen

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Billbard.

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  • Page Deleted.
    August 14, 2008

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    Interesting choice of words and form. I really liked the closing word "Unseen".

    Thankyou for entering.

    Keira
    Forever--x


  • Touchof1der silver member
    August 13, 2008

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    I like this a lot Bill. Each line builds upon the next with the closing word delivering a powerful message that says it all. This is superbly penned and well thought out. Good luck in the contest my friend.
    ♥ Touchof1der