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Cold man

The trees sway in the wind,
Flowing like this life i am a part of,
I wonder to myself if things will change,
If the wind will turn a different way,
A broken heart should mean nothing to the cold man,
But, within us all, there lies the grip of humanities shortfalls.

Never again will i gaze into the eyes of love.

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  • mrocun
    January 11

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    I've read this before, but I want to comment on it now.
    It's very well written and I can feel it.

    Samuel

  • kay1719
    August 27, 2008
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    This is really amazing Nick.


  • MyDecember
    August 19, 2008

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    your writting style is changing, its really good. i find it easier to understand now. i know i've said it like a million times but you need to forget about her and move on. you're going to find someone great, just give her a chance.
    love