Melting snow
with escaping daffodils
Suns rays
and rainbow skies
Baby animals
in sparkling spring
Dancing
Joy
Laughter
Happiness overpowering
A contest entry
- Quickie!! 20/10/1 by VoltaicHypnosis.
875 points, ended August 17, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wonderful, so peaceful and uplifting! Thankyou!
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often creating stuff under such restrictions doesn't always turn out OK but you have risen to the challenge and have submitted a formidable Write,well done
Cyber Artist
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Thanks
XkX
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awww, this is beautiful and sweet, wonderful write and good luck
Stephanie ♥
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Thank you
XkX
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nice
its very sweet and it reminds me of Spring -
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Thank you
XkX
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This is a little random but alas I like it
It shows true sensuality in love or that's the emotion i got from it.
One thing though you don't need all the commas you could just leave it without any , or . or anything normally , or . signals a pause.
All my love,
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Xkx
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beautiful -- please fix the typos before judging.
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It's fixed. Never noticed how bad the spelling was. AP spell cheack didnt work
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What a lovely thought with
some great imagery here.
Good luck to you!
Jeremy0826
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