Clasping upon the floor
my heart is in despair.
His crushing words
destroyed my reputation,
integrity washed away.
tossing frantically…
Author notes
Describe a dream vision,
in twenty words.
A contest entry
- Quickie!! 20/10/1 by VoltaicHypnosis.
875 points, ended August 17, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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sad and something that rolling in my mind and will be for some time..beautiful write dear..
All the best in the contest!
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Wow! love this piece, its so.... Human!!! Very good!
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ohhh... nice work here.... well written.
Best of luck in the contest! -
Very sad but a great thought
for this picture prompt! Good
luck to you with this one!
Jeremy0826
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