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Re-Born-Chapter1:Jane

                      Jane
I have been alive for fifteen  years.
Wait.
Be that not right.  I died two years ago.
And I’ve been dead.
Ever since August, I’ve been dead.
Cold.
Unmoving.
I locked myself in my room and stayed there until school.
Stayed there and Rocked in my chair.
Brushed my golden hair.
Played my piano.
I didn’t bother heading downstairs to what was my family.
And they didn’t miss me.
They pretended that I was still alive.
Still with them.
No.
I’m gone, and will stay that way until she comes back.
My name is Jane, and nobody understands me.

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  • Lancashire Lad
    August 11, 2008
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    deep and heavy

    that was quite a haunting read but i proper enjoyed it. nice poem. Nick