One night I dreamt of pastures new,
Of angels, blessed sunshine,
It was all so beautiful,
Alas, then I awoke...
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A contest entry
- Quickie!! 20/10/1 by Twisted Temptress.
875 points, ended August 17, 2008, 10 entries
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Love this...
So much said in so few words...
Visions that we see on the edge of perception, that we can never grasp & fade into twilight dreams...
Another great write...
Well done!!!
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YUP..we have to wake up form dreams dear..beautiful write even if taken metaphorically..
All the best in the contest!
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ooh this is lovely, i love your wording,
all my love,
kitty xxx -
perfect word limit, great background...
love what you did with those words.
Good luck!!
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oops sorry lol
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It's terrible that some dreams have
to end for us! It's such a wonderful
feeling to know that you dream of such
beauty as angels and sunshine. Lovely
work here and good luck to you!
Jeremy0826 -
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Thank you, unfortunately my dreams are never a reality abnd I suffer the same depression and possibly more than anyone else
but hey life is still life it's too be lived 
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