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The Feeling

You can close your eyes to what you don't want to see
but you can't close your heart to what you don't want to feel.

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  • hardeepb
    August 11, 2008
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    Wow...this is so true...I know someone close to me who tries to close her heart...but it doesn't really work...I never want her to close me out of her heart...especially when deep down she wants me there...

    I loved this...so much thought packed into two lines...

  • StarPrincess
    August 11, 2008

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    I agree short and to the point. You have said a mountain full in just these two lines. But there are a lot of people that do close their hearts to what they don't feel, they close their minds to what they don't know, and keep their eyes closed so they don't have to learn what they don't know. Powerful, and from the heart, it makes the reader sit up and take notice, as well as think.. Thank you for sharing.

    Hugs,
    Barbara


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 11, 2008

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    So true and a great thought
    for this contest! Well done
    and thanks a lot for sharing it.
    Good luck to you with this one!




    Jeremy0826


  • Lsh-x
    August 11, 2008
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    Wow. Short and to the point.

    I like it.

    Good luck.