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Untitled as Usual

Long may the terraces last
They may have their faults
But at least they are no longer at fault
Something gone long unsaid by yourself
With your witch-hazel smiles and coughs
That forever cast you as the 'bad-guy'

And the Lord is swimming in the river
Rimbaud is locked tight in his room
The virgin is at the alter
And Big Bones is up for a fight
Pissed-up and proclaiming loudly
He could take the fuckin' lot

Cut the wires to the flower incubators
Fend off the advances of the counter-weighters
Long may the terraces last
Because if they fail us now
As the heroes of the day say they will
Then false is right and night is day

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  • Hello...No.One.Home silver member
    August 11, 2008
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    A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in the contest.

    Rose


  • Klayer
    August 11, 2008
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    'Then false is right and night is day' Very nice
    Great poem and keep wrighting!

    XkX