Rubs me not with gentle hands
But with intimations
When all light sucked,
Stranded which way to move
I looked at web,
Like sailor to compass
Words came from frankness
Not usual words of courage,
But born of reality,
Unlike ostrich solution
Calling all sentiment ‘crap’
Unknown reality
Far away from me
Appears now and then
Kids me, scolds me
I never grew weary
Such delicious dishes
Of different varieties
Showers praise
Albeit brickbats
I love playing on web
Unknown made it
such enjoyable passtime
Author notes
venugopal, Unknown
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