purging away the complications
&& sweating out those memory's.
stale candy's were scrunched between the sidewalk dents &&
magazine clipping's taped up on the wall made that confusing girl
in the mirror look like nothing more than a failure,&& mommy said
later that that was being generous.
Im starving for perfection,I wanna waste away && lose myself all
over the tiles.Vomiting up the deafened promises because we both
know big girls dont cry,do they?you just lose yourself in the
scale and wish on those calories.
surviving off of diet pill prayers && sitting up at four in the
morning because sweety those last couple mouthfulls wouldn't let up,
sugar free gum was holding my sanity together && I knew I couldent
take much more of this..
but the question is;;
can you??
Author notes
i have bad ass writers block =/
A contest entry
- write me a web of words. by deadpixie020.
700 points, ended September 11, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ED v. Recovery by bigXfatXemo.
700 points, ended October 22, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I recognise this one
Well, even if I wasn't bias I'd still love this. You do dirty pretty so well, tis fitting for said topic methinks too. Stunning love, yet paints out the hell of ana/mia in black and white... hard to ignore. Bravo sweetie.
Hope youre doing ok,
xXx
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stale candy's were scrunched between the sidewalk dents&&
magazine clipping's taped up on the wall made that confusing girl
in the mirror look like nothing more than a failure,&& mommy said
later that that was being generous.
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i like the wording you used in that stanza
its very well written
i also loove the title
goodluck in the contest. -
purging away the complications
&& sweating out those memory's.
I don't understand the need for the double '&' sign but that's just me
also memory's should be memories.
you have the same problem in your second stanza with 'clipping's' and 'candy's'
other than that, I like this piece.
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amazing write.
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wow u are an amazing writer, thanks for the add to your favorites, you are one of mine also
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