Darling it feels,
As if each love was a lie,
Each man that would be there,
Would fall away soon enough.
They talk sh*t.
So i say that i shouldn't,
[and you know that i'm right]
But the regrets keep on coming;
Nothing will ever be perfect.
Skies turn utterly black,
When my tears start to fall,
The rain that continued,
While you were my lover.
I remember,
Oh i remember.
You would comfort me &. you would tell me i'm beautiful.
But no matter what,
The scars will keep reminding me.
I made more mistakes [cutting was my only love after those boys].
And now nothing hides my past,
my memories,
my mistakes.
A contest entry
- Mistakes and Memories by whiterabbit..
380 points, ended August 28, 2008, 24 entries
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Comments
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Nicely penned! Love the emotions you've got there, kinda how i felt some time ago. Anyways, great write!
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I really like this and the raw emotions in here. I'm sorry you've had to go through this. I can relate to this poem. Great job and thanks for entering. I hope things have gotten better for you.
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Wow...nice write...very dark...I know someone who feels like shit about her mistakes...not turning to cutting but...isolation...
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This was amazing, I love it. It's so heartfelt and passionate, with such raw emotion. I know what this is like, but just stay strong, you'll make it through this.
Goodluck in the contest though, this is really good.
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i LOVE this piece and i know how that feels but i keep trying dont give up thsi to shall pass
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