I must say, you're definitely my favorite farewell.
A long war ensued, battles won and battles lost,
Comrades struck down before my very eyes,
Wounds recieved and given,
With no one around to treat them.
A compassionate enemy
A ruthless ally
A beautiful abomination
And a warped jewel.
None of them fit into their catagories,
And I'm tired of sorting them out.
I must say, you're definately my favorite farewell.
So goodbye, cruel world,
I leave you to more capable hands.
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27. Favourite Farewell
A contest entry
- 130 titles by xxRainbowDawnxx.
525 points, ended August 21, 2008, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any response?
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wow this is awesome, all i could picture is a verbal war of words back and forth between you and a guy, and how people got graged into the whole mess.
awesome write
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Awww this is so cute, I love the first line, it's a classic, sounds like a line I would come out with, because it seems to be the case often; I have to say goodbye, but it hurts more than anything.
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I must say, you're definately my favorite farewell.
AHHHH it bothers me so much when people misspell definitely.
'None of them fit into their catagories,
And I'm tired of sorting them out.'
love that.
good luck. -
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sorry... my bad on the typo...
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this paints a picture in yer mind. great job ^^
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Oh, marvelous indentity terms. The ending line is the best. Very self declaratory.
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Thanks a lot!
I actually borrowed that line from a poem I wrote a couple of years ago, but it seemed to fit well.
Thanks for reading!
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