Petals of beauty’s splendor lily
Unfold your delicate magnificence
Revealing such aesthetic elegance
Patient in your artistic gracefulness
Loveliness is absolutely reflected in perfection
Exquisite in the grandeur of nature’s elite.
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A Jeannie D created border.
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Short and sweet - very nice - a beautiful tribute to the lily - Bless God - Joe - (Dobar Dan) -------------------------------------------------- smiles
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beautiful border
Jeannie D sure makes some beautiful backgrounds, really like this one it is very pretty
Love the poem too it is pretty as well
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Beautiful
Yes Lily's are so beautiful and you expressed their beauty so eloquently here in this poem. The imagery with soft gentle feelings made this a pure delight to read. Wonderful vocabulary executed here. Thank you for sharing with me.
Much Love
Kelle Marie
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The border and background are a perfect serving plate for your acrostic!
As "Lily" is the title, if it is not part of the proper name of the flower, I would consider dropping the "lily" from the end of the first line.
Very nice "unfold your delicate magnificence" and "aesthetic elegance." "Grandeur of nature's elite" puts me in mind that purple was the color of royalty. Lauditory write!
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Purple is my sister's favorite color. Love this poem as it reminds me of her.
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I think you like flowers. And flowery words. You do both of them well. smile
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This is a most unusual but beautiful flower. It seems almost mysterious. You words paint such elegance that compliments the Lily perfectly. Well done my good bad girl!
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A flowering write and the wonder of a lily, the words youve choosen is increbile
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You have certainly captured the beauty of the lily in this. A most beautiful write and love the border
Thanks so much for sharing
Gaylene
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