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Iris

golden heart of delicate Iris
all aglow with thoughts most desirous
passions rise reflecting lovers’ sins
naked touches of skin to skin….

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A beautifully designed border all credit to Jeannie D... Thanking you

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  • daviscth silver member
    November 27, 2008

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    his is a delightful poem and the background really brings your words to life. I can almost smell them!!! Thanks for sharing.


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    November 7, 2008

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    Beautifully sensual. The poem compliments this border very well but also a poem that can stand alone. Well done. Best to you


  • robert bolin
    October 28, 2008

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    I love the imagery and the poetic soul of this write
    Holds the heart in one breath and flexs love in one quenching thrust truely an amazing write.


  • Roaddog Wolf
    September 30, 2008

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    another beautifully designed border

    very pretty verse to go along with the lovely border as well......... very nicely penned , good write I like it allot


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    August 11, 2008

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    Perfect! The Iris to me is a very sensual flower and you have written a beautiful poem to express the emotions perfectly. Leaves the reader with a deep sigh. . . .


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    August 11, 2008

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    Oooooooo lovely and sensual I like this very much and the border is another spectacular Jeannie D creation
    Thanks so much for sharing.
    Gaylene


  • dustookie2
    August 11, 2008
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    I am unable to present the colours on this text for some reason.

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