I see you there, smiling at me.
I touch your face, so beautiful to see.
Your eyes soften as we move closer together.
Breathing slow as we are caught in the moment.
As our lips meet, my mind falls apart.
Loosing myself in our gentle embrace.
You are determined yet unsure.
I am delighted you choose to share yourself with me.
Our first kiss my one cherished memory.
A contest entry
- A Kiss by strangerforeigner.
405 points, ended September 5, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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excellent~
Beautiful...
Cherishing the memory of the first kiss indeed
Best of luck in the contest
I entered this one too....so nice to meet you
Do hope you come give mine a read as well
Susan~~~
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Very sweet. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!
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Many Thanks! I haven't gotten to share this one much as we delighted to be able to enter it into your contest.
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I sense a theme to these poems! Is someone in love!
I hope all the best for you! 
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Hoping and dreaming
Actually these are about love that has come and gone. They are my sweet memories and hopes for the future. Thank you I'm glad you liked them...
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They are wonderful memories then! I hope the future is just as nice!
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