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[Draining May.]

I can't take a shower
w  i  t  h  o  u  t
remembering how you tasted
l a s t     m a y .
[I've taken three today.]

I can't stand up.
I just   sit down
& let   the water
[scald       me.]

It feels like me again.
This is easier than lying.

[All I want to do is lie face down next to a clogged drain.]

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Written January 13th, 2004

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  • ReginaTreadway
    January 13, 2004
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    wow......raw emotion...i like it!!!