your my hero
my everything
so please dont take that away
if you throw that away ill die
i love till day i die
when i first saw you i feel in love with u
and ever since then i have been in love with you
even if u break up with me, break my heart, love me, kiss me, hug me whatever u do
i love u
you are the first one on my list and you are gunna stay there
i think about you when i wake up and i think about you when i fall asleep
you are my dream come true
i love u so dearly
A contest entry
- Form Poetry Anyone? by e m i l y.
450 points, ended August 23, 2008, 15 entries
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a great poem cuz. i love it. i also love you and miss you. i enjoyed reading it. i feel bad that your "hero" is not there for you any more. i feel bad that you had to break up with him but he did not treat you right. i know its also been awhile since "the breakup" happened and i know your over it now, but i still feel bad. i know chris really liked you but he did not treat you right.
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I'm extremely sorry.
I have no clue why kind of form this is AND
your spelling is horrible.
I have to say it's a little cliche at that too.
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this is a great piece of writing with alot of love in it!!
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this is very emotion-filled ^^ i am glad you love someone this much. the person is very lucky, i bet.
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thanks
aww thank you yes you should see my other poems i will probally put them up tomm
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i love this poem
this poem amazes myself so much even though i wrote it
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