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Can You See

Can you see who's beside you
Almost see-through
Yes, it's me
And can you see that love is true
Though it isn't new
Just like me

Can you see what's in my heart
No, we're still apart
Is it me
And can you see that from the start
You were a part
Part of me

Can you see that I'm crying
Yet I'm flying
Yes, that's me
And can you see I'm not lying
I'm still trying
That's just me

Can you see what you don't believe
What you can't conceive
Just like me
And can you see that I cannot leave
I will not deceive
That's not me

That just isn't me

Can you see that love is true
Though it isn't new
Just like me
And can you see who's beside you
Almost see-through
Yes, it's me

And I will always be
I will always be

Does it flow well? Could you feel the emotion?

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    August 15, 2008

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    truly something special has been penned here, and the fact that the emotion behind it is strong, just makes it better, keep it flowing