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Sun is Witness

Missing image
Cradle to grave
Sun witness
Cross over buried
Signify end of evil

Travails and tribulations
As waves on sea
Tracks us as shadow,
Ultimate end of which
He stands proof

Feeds light without break
Baby smooth as bud
Dead, as autumn leaf,
Cannot halt its moment
Cherish till eternity
For he alone vouchsafe

Sun is everlasting
Within lasting things,
Dead renew,
As water drop in cloud
Engine behind activity
Priming life, without extinguishing



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  • mjm1495
    August 23, 2008

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    Wow is the only word I can say. It was very spiritual and I enjoyed it a lot. I really liked the part that said "priming life, without extinguishing"