Cradle to grave
Sun witness
Cross over buried
Signify end of evil
Travails and tribulations
As waves on sea
Tracks us as shadow,
Ultimate end of which
He stands proof
Feeds light without break
Baby smooth as bud
Dead, as autumn leaf,
Cannot halt its moment
Cherish till eternity
For he alone vouchsafe
Sun is everlasting
Within lasting things,
Dead renew,
As water drop in cloud
Engine behind activity
Priming life, without extinguishing
Author notes
In honor of Sun
A contest entry
- Quickie by earthangel33.
475 points, ended August 27, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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Wow is the only word I can say. It was very spiritual and I enjoyed it a lot. I really liked the part that said "priming life, without extinguishing"

