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Sweet Sixteen

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I'm going shopping for decorations,
that are colorful and bright.
Getting balloons and streamers,
so this special party will be just right.

I'll order a seven layer cake,
from the best bakery in town.
Send out wonderful invitations,
it's her sweet sixteen this time around.

Hiring a DJ is simply a have to,
so we can hear the hottest tracks.
A little Pink Floyd, Eagles and Led Zeppelin,
Weezer, Dispatch and Johnson~his fist names Jack.

We'll have lots of chips and dip,
and little sausages in BBQ sauce.
I'll have a photographer to take pictures,
I don't care about the cost.

We'll fill a brand new trash can with ice,
and stuff is with different juices and drinks.
They'll be a long table for the food,
and one that will hold the gifts I think.

All the boys will ask you to dance,
for the night belongs to you.
Your party will be filled with many people,
some friends of old and some that are new.

You'll have the best party you could dream of,
a sweet sixteen like none before.
When the night is almost over,
you'll be so happy and blessed with more.






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It's a party Woodooloo!!!   Just for You!!!!
Written January 13th, 2004

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  • Madison Attitude
    January 25, 2004
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    This is great Sam, congrats on the Silver! Aimee xo


  • Lo0opy
    January 21, 2004
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    I'm coming to this party!! SOunds like a blast But uh...can I bring beer? haha jk...16 is too young...how bout keys to a brand new car? That would be SWEET! ANywayz...great job Sam...you set up quite a nice party And I do love the choice of music!! Sweet ass
    OH...Happy BIRTHDAY CrazyCrys!

    ~~T~~


  • fluffleduck
    January 14, 2004
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    Hee hee, party time! Sounds like a perfect party, the poem explained it just right! I hope the birthday goes better than you can ever imagine. If it goes as well as described in the poem then its gonna be fun!

    The poem had a warm party feel to it, and the colors and background helped to enhance this.

    Good work!

    Fluff x

  • sweetypie101
    January 13, 2004
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    this is such a cool poem! the really like the background and stuff. Good Luck wit the contest!!! *Cheers*
    *~SweetyPie~*


  • qnhoneybee
    January 13, 2004
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    This was a great party for a sweet sixteen. Lots of fun, food and music. See there is another talent for you, party coordinator! You are going to busy with your many talents.


  • astralshepherd gold member
    January 13, 2004
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    PARTY!!!!

  • -Aquarius-
    January 13, 2004
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    Aww thanks Sam!! I hope my birthday goes as well as you described in this poem. I liked the added touch of puting in the music I like too. Thanks so much for your entry and good luck in the contest,
    Crystal

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