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Bleed this love out of me

i used to walk by your house
and never imagined the guy living inside
who would imagine a year later
I'd be in that house with you

living with you
loving you
becoming one with you
then being broken in two by you

the man i trusted most
loved the most
blinded me with a sweet smile
and kind words
words I dreamed of hearing
but had absolutely no worth

for five years he dragged me around
undecided on what he wanted
on how he felt
all along my heart broke
my dreams came undone
one by one the pieces of my heart fell

and so tonight I will bleed this love out
bleed it out of my heart
out of my life
never to bare his children
never to be his wife
mistress to the man of my dreams no more
tonight i will bleed this love clean out of me
bleed it out the soul of me
wont let my love control

For if I die tomorrow
will you care
just this once
I want someone who's afraid of losing me
not just someboy who is using me
because they are afraid to be alone
or because they have no other friends
tonight this one sided love ends
I'll bleed this love out of me tonight

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  • Wow

    I so feel that, I can connect to it, it's as if we share the same mind only I'm insane and your not lmao


  • Necromancer Kitten
    August 16, 2008

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    This poem is so heartfelt, and just absolutely amazing. I love the way the entire thing fits together. The imagery of the "mistress to the man of my dreams" worked especially well!


  • ScissorhandHugs
    August 10, 2008

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    wow, i luv the title and the lines"mistress to the man of my dreams no more and words i dreamed of hearing but had absolutely no worth" in my opinion ths guy seems like a jerk to lead u on wit false dreams, awhsum poem